Chthonic Punk

Aris Forcer sensed it in every cell in his human body.

Another dimension.

Another universe.

Ever since their ordeal with the tesseract, having survived the gatekeeper, nothing had been the same. Not physics. Not biology. Not logic. Everything was upside down, inside out. But he felt alive, and as much as things were different, many aspects of this world were the same.

Another city of scoundrels.

Another tavern of thieves.

His partner in crime, Owis Coop, didn’t seem too disorientated. A mechanoid with a badly short-circuited empathy complex, Owis appeared to revel in the new chaos. It drank its beverage of nanomide… or Psieshe as it was known… and…

How can this be? thought Aris. How could mechanoid technology exist here?

He looked over at his other companion, the Brinnerian. The slave had proven its loyalty time and again, with its magical time-sword, which fit right in this science-defying realm.

“I’m guessing our quest is over,” said Aris. “A bit of an anticlimax, I must say.”

“Anticlimax?” asked Owis. “Are you kidding me? We’re in another realm. We’ve transcended spacetime. This is heaven. We’re living in the afterlife. We’re immortal.”

“For a robot,” said Aris. “You’re kinda obsessive over your nonsensical spirituality.”

The notorious bounty hunter looked back at Aris and said, “For a human, your kind of stupid.”

“You are both wrong,” spoke the Brinnerian, something it rarely did. “This is no heaven.” It then turned to Aris. “And the climax is far from this moment.”

“What are you talking about? We’ve found the citadel,” said Aris. “…and its treasure containing a whole new universe, which basically means we can’t profit from it. We can’t go back. We’re stuck here forever.”

“You are still wrong,” said the Brinnerian.

“What is your story, slave?” asked Owis, who seemed intent on clinging onto his investment.

The Brinnerian sat with the two outlaws, and while the ultra-alien world continued on around them, it explained, “Once upon an age, a demigod called Dyzan and his disciples ventured to the Tomb Moon of Dacos in search of a sage known as Kule, a long-dead sorcerer who may be the key to overthrowing his rival, the Zenthian god Brinner, whose domain of Riathe was the richest in the Realm. Using one of Kule’s worshippers to awaken him, Dyzan convinced the sage to join his cause. With the sorcerer’s black magic at his command, Dyzan easily laid waste to Brinner’s formidable army.”

“Are you this god, Brinner?” asked Aris.

“Let me finish my story.”

“Let the slave finish,” said Owis.

The Brinnerian continued,” Eventually, Dyzan became eager to be rid of Kule, fearing that the sorcerer could well turn against him. During the battle against Brinner, Dyzan attempted to kill the sage by feeding him to his disciples, but Kule, half-eaten, escaped by conjuring up a lightning storm. With the last remains of his once powerful army, the god Brinner prepared to battle it out against Dyzan in a last-ditch effort to save Riathe. He ordered his family to evacuate to the nearest moon, and entrusted his youngest offspring with his time sword, instructing the boy to avenge his death should it occur.”

“You’re the son,” exclaimed Aris.

“Yes,” said the Brinnerian.

“What happened to your father?” asked Owis.

“With the army of Riathe destroyed, the god Brinner was captured and executed personally by Dyzan. I witnessed this, having gone back to the corpse-littered battlefield. I saw it happen.”

“How does one kill a god?” interrupted Owis.

“I’m not sure,” said the Brinnerian. “Somehow, Dyzan knew how to accomplish such a thing. Afterwards, I and what few brethren that were left, fled to the moon of Niridon, where the sage Kule had taken refuge. The ancient sorcerer conjured up a way to escape our world, into yours, where we spent the next several aeons surviving as best we could.”

“So this old sage created the tesseract?” asked Owis.

“Not exactly, the denizens of Niridon built that.”

Aris put his hand up. “Wait up. Wizards. Gods. Inter-dimensional travel. This is too much.”

“Relax. It’s the under-universe,” said Owis, then turned to the Brinnerian. “You must like our company. Any reason you’re sticking around? I’m guessing, you’re not bonded to slavery here.”

“I admit, I’m fond of you,” said the Brinnerian. “But in all truth, I’m compelled to seek vengeance for my people and…”

“And you want us to help you,” said Aris. “I don’t know about that.”

Owis grabbed his accomplice by the shoulder. “Hang on a millisecond. Since this place ain’t no heaven, maybe we should earn our keep around here. It’s obviously more dangerous than from where we came. A petty human like you won’t survive much. I say we help this demigod warrior. It pays to pick a side, right?”

Aris knew the mechanoid with the faulty cyberbrain spoke the truth. Regardless of the amazing world, he found himself in, Aris longed to return to his own reality. At least there he was an interstellar policeman, albeit a corrupt one that’s wanted across four galaxies. Still, he had allies there, connections, hideaways he knew. Here, in this exaggerated simulacrum, where monsters were monsters and physics wasn’t quite physics, he knew next to nothing. “Can you help me return to my world?”

“I can,” answered the Brinnerian.

Aris nodded.

Owis grinned. “We’re in. What’s the plan?”

The tall slender Brinnerian turned and exited the tavern. Aris and Owis rushed after their new employer, venturing out into the narrow streets of Riathe. The crowds reminded Aris of the diverse population of Polaris on Gemini Beta and Old Earth cities like Greater Tripolis. He spotted many Brinnerian lookalikes and wondered how did all these races evolve. Looking at the former slave he realises something. “Do you have a name?”

The Brinnerian didn’t look back. “Bit late for that. Besides, we’ve gotten on well without such niceties.”

“Can I ask another question,” asked Aris. “I swear, It’ll be the last. I’m getting bored asking them myself.”

“The Citadel?” asked the Brinnerian.

“Yes.”

“Riathe means fortress.”

Aris looked up at the cityscape, and beyond the skyscrapers, the swarms of rocket cars and blimps floating in the haze, he could see spires, buttresses and glimpses of a great dome. The Brinnerian kept walking, and they followed until they came upon a precinct with narrower and darker streets. Under neon lights they passed by a conglomeration of shopfronts, all providing services unrecognisable to Aris; unlike Owis, who seemed excited by everything it saw.

The Brinnerian entered a nondescript store, and both outlaws followed, trusting it to be safe. Inside, they met up with a group of yellow-coloured Brinnerians. At first, these aliens seemed confused, then shocked, gasping as if the world had cracked open, and then they fell over themselves as they rushed in to hug the Brinnerian. One in particular, a blue-skinned, less slender looking, and female fought her way to the Brinnerian and grabbed him. Aris never knew, always considering the Brinner slaves as sexless beings.

The two spoke in a language far removed from what the human could understand. Aris heard the word, ‘Aquelles’, over and over. Then the Brinnerian spoke in General Galactic, “It has been a long time. I have aged yet you, Nova, all of you, look the same as I remember.”

Aris noticed the weathered skin compared to the silky texture of the others.

“Aquelles,” said the girl Brinnerian, who appeared more humanoid, more human-like, than the surrounding males. “What’s important is that you have returned, and your timing couldn’t be more divine. A great rebellion has begun within the city of Riathe…” She then spoke in her native language.

Owis leaned over and said, “Did I hear the word rebellion?”

“Great,” said Aris. “Another war, as if being caught between three galactic superpowers fighting it out in the normal universe wasn’t enough. What is this hangout?” Aris noticed more females, scantily clad, but yellow-skinned.

“It’s a brothel,” confirmed Owis. “What’s the matter? Got some kinda human hangup over that as well?”

The ceiling grumbled, and the walls shook. The crowds dispersed in a clamorous uproar. The street outside lit up as laser beams burnt through pedestrians. Death screams echoed by the thousand.

Aquelles yelled, “Dyzan’s monstrous disciples.”

“We go up,” said Nova and her group launched towards the lifters.

Aris considered making a stand, but when he saw Owis running for it; crazy, fearless, Owis with the malfunctioning positronic brain that made him prone to ultraviolence; Aris decided he best follows the rebels.

They crammed into one of many lifters and launched, slowly. “This lifter is taking its time,” said Aris. “Owis, can you hack into it and set it to ‘Life or Death’ speed?”

“The roof is docked with rocket cycles,” said Nova, “maybe a balloon ferry.”

“They will be expecting us,” said Aquelles.

Owis huffed and said, “They won’t be expecting me.”

Aris counted the seconds, then the minutes. Holy shit, he thought. How high is this thing? He heard rumbling beyond the steel and plastic walls of the lifter, reminding him to take the safety off on his two Deemsters.

The lifter stopped and the doors opened. True to form; not wanting any competition to cramp its style, Owis jumped out with his mini-canon blazing. Outside, a horde of Dyzan’s winged disciples hovered above the rooftop, each unleashing streams of burning blue light at the rebels bursting out of the building’s four lifters. Aquelles, time-sword swinging, leapt and swiped at the low-flying targets, appearing at multiple points in the air at the same instant. Nova cajoled her brethren to charge using the cover provided by a relentless Owis. The firefight escalated when more disciples descended.

Aris rushed to the transport platform and secured the position, killing several warrior-disciples. He turned to wave the rebel over but saw Aquelles being overwhelmed by the enemy. The sword in the Brinnerian’s hand vanished as soon as a dozen disciples restrained Aquelles, zapping him into unconsciousness. Aris glimpsed the time-sword as it flashed in and out of existence as it fell down into the void.

Acknowledging the situation, Owis stepped forward to confront the disciples, but Nova grabbed and pulled it towards the platform. Aris hopped on a rocket-cycle and waited for the rebels to do the same. When Nova climbed on behind him, Aris launched the T-shaped vehicle over the edge. They fell, picking up speed until they reached terminal velocity.

“Up,” yelled Nova.

“The sword is down there.”

Nova patted him on the shoulder and braced tighter against his torso. As they approached one of the street bridges, she reached out and pointed to a flashing light surrounded by sparks. Aris, having never ridden a Riathian rocket-cycle, treated it like a standard glider, pulling back on the two hand-pedals to raise the front. They tilted upward but their speed became a deadly problem. Nova reached over and slid back the large pad between his knees, slowing the rocket-cycle to a hover. She jumped off and retrieved the half-visible, slightly intangible weapon.

“Head to the Mistralis,” she said as she climbed back on.

Aris followed her directions until they arrived over a stone tower, jutting out of an elevated precinct overlooking an urban valley. They landed among a ragtag of damaged multi-shaped rocket-cycles. Inside, Aris found the rebels arguing amongst themselves. He spotted Owis nursing a wound. “That went well,” he said.

Owis declined to respond, instead, focussed on bypassing fused ribocircuitry.

“The revolution begins,” cried Nova. The Brinnerians greeted her with a unified roar.

The rally continued in local-speak, so Aris sat with his telluric comrade. The feeling, that he was in over his head, finally sank in. “What is this place, Owis?”

“Are you asking for real, this time?”

“I’ve listened to your explanation, but I do not understand your explanation.”

Owis said, “We are in the same universe which has several sub-layers. We are in one such place.”

“Explain it to me,” insisted Aris. “Scientifically.”

“We are in a sub-universe of a hyper-universe which is part of a wider universe.”

“Not helping,” said Aris.

Owis persevered, “The prime state is kaos, it is nothing and everything at once. It is a cylindrical vortex of infinity. It has no mind, conscience or divinity. Yet, it exists and doesn’t exist, a duality of sorts. Infinite nothing means finite something, so something is created out of nothing, and nothing acts as the end of something, so something is always finite, right? Are you following this?”

“Nope.”

“This finite something is the wider universe. A thin layer that is wrapped around the vortex of kaos, slowly being destroyed by kaos. The wider universe spawns hyper-universes either by design or mathematical accident, and most of these have one or more, depending on the design or accident, sub-universes. So ‘we’re’ in such a place. This is the legendary Chthon, the genesis of all myth.”

The hours passed as Aris let the words sink into his human mind. In this timeless realm, he could only judge time by how tired he became. Eventually, the rally ended, and Nova approached them.

“We are storming the great hall of Brinstar,” she said. “My brother is imprisoned there.”

“Brother?” asked Aris, suddenly feeling somewhat differently about this rebel.

“Seriously,” said Owis. “Can homo-sapiens not view everything they experience in such a biological manner?”

Nova seemed unperplexed, “Dyzan has also invited five lords of Zenthia to the citadel. He plans on killing them.”

“Who are these lords?” asked Aris.

“They are my aunts and uncles,” she replied.

“That’s quite a family,” said Aris.

Owis stated, “Her father was a god. That means these lords are gods.”

Nova nodded.

“How does a mortal kill a god?” mused Owis. “Can a god murder another god? Is that possible?”

“These things are not known,” she said. “What is known, Dyzan has lured the Zenthians to the citadel by offering them a chance to save my brother, whom he plans on executing. The first to offer Dyson godhood will secure Aquelles’s life. Then Dyzan intends on attacking the Zenthians.”

“How do you know all this?” asked Owis. “Such plans would be military-grade secrets.”

Nova looked behind her, at an older-looking Brinnerian, who limped towards them and spoke gravely. “I know of these plans because I was the one who conjured them up. I am Gaprice, Chief Adviser to the Emperor. Once Dyzan becomes a god, he will plunge our universe into chaos. Dyzan’s paranoia knows no boundary. He fears the gods and is willing to challenge them all.”

Aris responded, “This is not just a petty revolutionary war, this is a tussle of cosmic proportions.” His appetite for adventure had suddenly waned.  

“What’s the counter plan?” said Owis.

With that, Gaprice revealed the plan and soon after, Aris found himself among the insertion team on its way to the epicentre of the citadel, via the underground route. Beneath the sprawling city, a sprawling network of sewers brought them to the dungeons directly underneath the great hall of Brinstar. The lower levels presented little to no security hurdles, so part of the team set upon freeing the thousands of prisoners, but Aris pushed ahead with a small group. They reached the palace grounds finding the guard detail lacking.

“This is too easy,” said Owis.

“The palace staff are busy servicing the banquet,” said Nova, carrying her sibling’s time-sword wrapped in a Sequillium rug they purchased from a local Mistrali alchemist. “The vast majority of Dyzan’s warrior-disciples are preparing for war.”

The telluric outlaws followed Nova and three other rebels deeper into the palace, arriving at a chamber with an oval arena surrounded by vast arches. In the centre, a circular dining table boasted over a hundred guests and servants, mostly the entourage of the five eminences distinguishable by their stature and an air of importance. At the apex, sat an imposing figure. Pompously uniformed and pontifical, Dyzan appeared poised to make a speech, constantly looking upward.

Aris looked up and saw a biomechanical form hanging from the dome, and spread-eagled within its five tremendous tentacles, a humanoid.

Aquelles.

“That’s Dyzan’s secret weapon,” said Nova. “A Gigathon.”

Aris stepped forward. “I’ll go up and attempt to free your brother. Nova, take Owis as close as you can to this Dyzan dude. The rest of you, take up positions near the lords, get the word out of Dyzan’s treachery.”

Owis grabbed him by the shoulder. “This doesn’t feel right. It is a set-up. We’re being used to distract these Zenthian beings.”

“Either way,” said Aris. “Once we free our Brinnerian friend, all chthonic hell will break loose. Nova, pass me the time-sword.”

Nova did so, nodded and then pulled Owis away, towards the crowd. The other rebels scattered, leaving Aris to wander the colonnades alone. He discovered a grand spiral of stone stairs and climbed them, all the way until he ascended to the top of the great arches.

“Behold the son of Brinner,” bellowed a voice below.

Aris made his way to the edge and for the first time could measure the true vastness of the monstrous, majestic Gigathon. When two giant tendrils parted, he spotted Aquelles, embedded in the Gigathon’s spiky skin. Every inch of its epidermis grew thousands of black crystalline needles, each stabbing out at anything that came into contact with it. Aquelles bled but was still alive, and conscious.

“Isn’t slavery so much better?” called out Aris.

Aquelles looked at him with bloodshot eyes and smiled. Uncloaking the time-sword, Aris held it out to him.

“All I ask,” echoed Dyzan’s voice. “Is to be your equal.”

“Come on,” said Aris. He heard a commotion below. He saw the palace guard swarm in and capture Nova. Aquelles saw it too and struggled against the tendrils. Aris wondered why Owis had not unleashed yet.

The Gigathon became more active.

“This selfishness will be your doom,” shouted Dyzan. “Be stubborn. Let the children of Brinner perish. Your fate awaits you.”

Aquelles growled, his pain visible as every muscle in his body rippled.

Below, Aris could see the Zenthian lords prepare to square off with a horde of warrior-disciples, who were already under attack by a ragtag of armed rebels and freed prisoners. Above him, two more Gigathons emerged. With the time-sword growing heavy in his hand, Aris wondered where in the multiverse had Owis gone to.

Aquelles pulled his bloodied arm free from the Gigathon’s grasp and reached out. Aris swung and tossed the ancient weapon forward. It was a weak throw; it began to tumble… but Aquelles snatched it out of the air, stabbing the Gigathon with it, puncturing its tough, bristly flesh a hundred times in the same second.

Thunder erupted beneath Aris.

He recognised the signature blast.

Owis had finally come out to play.

The Carpenter

All artists are influenced by the previous generation of artists. Westerns were part of John Carpenter’s cinematic diet growing up. John Ford, and Howard Hawks, these filmmakers were shaping cinema at the time, stamping out a movie language that would become the standard for anyone wishing the tell a story using cinema.

A fan of horror and science fiction movies such as The Thing from Another World and Forbidden Planet, John Carpenter defined another set of standards for a new generation of filmmakers. The modern horror genre is partly his offspring. Like his predecessors, Carpenter mastered the long game, building the tension until the big payoff. 

Nowadays, it’s clear that motion pictures have devolved somewhat. Big-budget Hollywood blockbusters lack most of the qualities that gave movies from the past the greatness they deservedly earned. Nowadays, even B-grade movies are more pathetic than ever. Low-budget productions are missing the mark completely.

It’s as if the current batch of filmmakers has stopped learning from the best.

Continue reading “The Carpenter”

The Forever Slave

“A slave?” asked Aris.

“Yes, a slave,” answered Owis, bemused why the Earthman’s facial features had suddenly shrivelled up.

“Why in Gaia’s name did you do that?” asked the renegade cop from the human-infested Milky Way.

Owis thought it obvious, but explained, “This is the slave capital of the Dark Galaxy.”

“And?”

“The Kocubani’s last words,” said Owis, drinking. “It mentioned slavery, right?”

Aris replied, “The deceased Kocubani pointed us to Brinner’s Moon. Doesn’t exactly specify anything about owning a slave.” The human hadn’t touched his beverage. He seemed genuinely outraged.

Owis uttered, “Slave I have been and shall remain, To a cruel tyrant, I’m tied with invisible chains, Yet always I put on the same brave face, Forever a slave, Forever I gaze.”

The Earthman sat at a bench, wedged in a booth overlooking the rail terminex of Brinner’s largest city, Llegamos. In seven megahours, the sun will rise and the entire city’s population will either migrate deeper underground or take the railships to escape the harsh radiation from the red-dwarf star, Obirus.

Aris asked, “Can this slave interpret it better? Does it speak?”

Owis looked at the slender, dark mauve humanoid. He’d seen these in every galaxy he’d ever visited. Reliable and resourceful, their loyal nature was legendary.

“No,” said Owis. The old bounty hunter looked up at the sky through the weathered glass. The trio of interstellar cruisers was shining brightly as they converged over their location. “If war breaks out between them, we will lose all chance of finding the citadel.”

Aris finally downed his drink and said, “We could be on the wrong planet.”

“Heaviest of realms, is what that Kocubani said.” Owis had no doubts. Brinner had the highest habitable gravity in the known Dark Galaxy.

Aris glared at the bounty hunter. “Before you shot it.”

The bounty hunter looked at the slave and stated, “The mere mention of slavery can only bring us here.”

“That doesn’t really help us.”

“Not my fault the Kocubani didn’t elaborate,” said Owis.

“You killed it, so yes, it kinda is your fault.”

“It was gonna kill us.” Owis wished the human would drop it. “We should leave. Between the coming dawn and the firestorm brewing above, our window of opportunity to find the citadel is closing fast.”

“That’s if the myth is real,” said Aris as he stood up and picked up his exo-suit. “A low-class railship is outbound in an hour. It’s affordable, so we should buy passage and scavenge the outskirts for more clues.”

The Brinnerian indigene watched the two outlaws gather their gear. The trio exited the skybar and rode the western platform down to the crowded Terminex. On 1.708g Brinner, hundreds of steel tracks crisscross the moon’s equator, converging at the main spaceport. Railships, each powered by a spectrum of energy sources, resupplied and repopulated, then headed west, towards the endless night, until a Brinnerian year later, reentered the Central Terminex from the east.

“Are you thinking of keeping this slave?” asked Aris. 

“I paid for it.” Owis studied the thin Brinnerian. It’s only possession- a staff strapped to its back. Metallic, yet transparent, it shimmered under the Llegamos city lights. It also quivered, unnaturally.

Aris noticed it too. “Never seen that before.”

“This region of the Dark Galaxy is a relic hunter’s dream. I tell you, the Citadel is real.”

“Can it do anything we can use?”

“It’s from a technical caste,” said Owis, elated that the human had dropped its arcane bias towards slavery. “Proficient in Nestor Class mechanics and Quantelectronics.”

The Forever - Slave Short Sci-fi Story

Owis stepped onto the next platform. Aris and the slave followed. Cheaper than all the other fares, the 224 Eclipse Line was also slower; catching the shadow of Obirus B as it meandered across the red desert.

“What if we’re wrong?” asked Aris. “There’s nothing on the Genixo records that even resembles a citadel.”

“We don’t know what it is,” said Owis as they boarded the town-sized railship. “It’s older than the universe. It could be anything.” They paid for crate-sized accommodation and got comfortable inside. Owis, even though a mechalogue and didn’t require sleep, took a long while to get into a state of slumber. It found it a useful meditational exercise, but this time, memories of past escapades, non-stop treachery, and near-death experiences haunted it.

“Wake up,” yelled Aris. “Sodality troopers have found us.”

The rear of the stationary railship was smouldering metal. “Where are they?” Owis poised for action.

Aris pulled at their gear. “Troopers come. Troopers gone. Must get going. Get into your exo-suit.”

“On foot, we won’t survive,” reasoned Owis. “The eclipse will outpace us.”

“There’s another railway less than fifty clicks across the desert.”

“Where’s the slave?” 

“Waiting for us down below.”

The two outlaws climbed down to the lower decks. Panicked residents scrambled towards the front assisted by the railship’s guards. Upon reaching the lowest platform, a  brigand blocked them from disembarking. Resentful for being left out of the recent carnage, Owis killed them. After jumping onto the sand, they both trekked out into the open and found the slave waiting on a hilltop.

“Why doesn’t it escape?” asked Aris.

“They are a synergetic race,” explained Owis. “Slavery is actually a misnomer.”

Aris lead the march out into the desert, under the eclipse of a gas planet; a great emerald ring, the edges glowing green as the light passed through its torrid atmosphere. Dawn was coming. In a short megahour, hell would arrive.

They entered a black leafless forest. Owis knew life festered all around, hibernetic, cyclic and prolific. Sunrise brought on the long sleep, thus the indigenous ecosystem had adapted to the local celestial power play perfectly.

“How could any civilisation arise in such a place?” asked Aris.

“Brinnerians live in the polar regions,” explained Owis. “According to the Genixo records, that region is most suitable for spontaneous sentient progression.”

“And yet,” spoke the slave, its voice as clear as any basic Dark Galaxian dialect. “We are not from this world.”

The two outlaws froze, unable to speak back to it.

The slave pointed to the gas giant. “Obirus means tyrant, in a language older than time.” 

For Owis, the answer to the riddle finally seemed to make sense.

Aris seemed to realise this too. “Brinner isn’t tidally locked.”

“But that moon is,” said Owis, pointing to a shining star. However, the jubilation was short-lived. The air screamed, and sporadic lights sent the tree shadows running as ten Trinary drop-ships pounded into the ground. Within seconds, ten squadrons of drones burst from the attack pods and surrounded them, giving the two outlaws and the Brinnerian little scope of a practical defence.

“This doesn’t look good,” stated Aris.

The slender slave reached for the staff and launched at the belligerents. It swung it like a sword and cut one drone in half. At the same instant, the same weapon appeared in four different locations and chopped up a quartet of drones. By the time the enemy unleashed a dozen shots, the slave had slashed its way to wiping out the Trinary detachment.

Owis recognised the time sword. He looked over at Aris and, with a grin wider than Obirus, said, “Do you believe in myths now?”

Star Wars

Star Wars: A Lost Hope

Now that this sad shit-show of a saga is over, the only thing we have left, is the thought, ‘what if they did a decent sequel trilogy with a coherent story without the political rape that Disney inflicted upon this series?’. How hard was it to produce something that remotely resembles a Star Wars story?

Apart from the visuals, there are three fundamental flaws with Episodes 7, 8 and 9. The visual effects and art design are the trilogy’s best asset, but sometimes they do act against the films. The entire narrative seems to be built around these great visuals. And then, to make things unbearable, the cluttering of the SFX is overdone, almost to the point of ridiculousness.

Continue reading “Star Wars: A Lost Hope”

Relic Hunters

“It’s a square.”

Silv heard correctly but wanted clarification. “What do you mean a square?”

“Probe One has just completed a second sweep over your location,” said The Captain, sitting comfortably in the Vitalis Express orbiting KIC10905746 C.  “We’ve now got a clearer picture of what’s down there. The anomaly’s actually a large geometric shape, fifty metres wide, just north of your location. In fact, there is a grid of quadrilateral structures underneath a kilometre of nitrogen ice.”

Looking over at Denis, Silv felt vindicated. “Was I right in choosing this dormant glacier for a first landing?”

“Could be naturally occurring formations,” said Denis.

Continue reading “Relic Hunters”

Brunner 2010

If there’s one thing John Brunner is known for, it would be the culture shock he gives readers via his books. “Stand on Zanzibar” is one of those, with a staccato style of writing, Brunner throws everything at you; multiple points of view, news bulletins, media blitzes and a cacophony of characters, locations, immersing you in an anarchic, overcrowded corporate megalopolis.

Continue reading “Brunner 2010”
Cruel Sky

Cruel Sky

Mez watched the Windslipper 4 disappear from the Command screens. The data streams ended abruptly with millions of zeros trailing each other homogeneously. The humans and mimicrons gasped but their horror didn’t last long. The Jovian Commission’s Fusionjet Program had already gobbled up hundreds of mimicron pilots and eighty-two human explorers. Mez guessed they had grown accustomed to the fatalities. What they weren’t used to was the price tag for this particular launch. Tacacorp, a quasi-government outfit that operated Callisto, was seeking to gain the commission’s contract and had sunk a lot of development into their Windslipper Project.

This deficiency in empathy didn’t stop Mez from feeling sadness over Natan VanWehl’s fate, a one-time colleague at the Goliath Project, a friend, and a human.

“Why do humans do this when we have mimicrons?” Mez had asked him once.

Continue reading “Cruel Sky”

Panology of Science Fiction: D

Disease

Whether its curing existing diseases or encountering new ones, a bit or a lot of pathology doesn’t hurt a story or make for a bad plot device. Injecting fear and dread into any scenario can be as easy as prescribing an epidemiologist or two.

The scope in speculating future disease can again be endless, e.g microbial, fungal, genetic, psychiatric, crystalline extraterrestrial agents, or cyber infections

Space-whirly, Plague Ship by Andre Norton

Denver Madness, The Sheep Look Up by John Brunner

The Green Line of Death, The Andromeda Strain by Michael Crichton

Helico virus & Silent Untreated Disease Syndrome, Brian Aldiss’s Helliconia Trilogy

Vampiris pandemic,I Am Legend by Richard Matheson

Zombie plague, World War Z: An Oral History of the Zombie War by Max Brooks.

Snow Crash, Snow Crash by Neal Stephenson

See also Plagues in Science Fiction and Fantasy

Draconis Prime

Of the thousand eyes, one nodalex caught Gnomon’s attention. Idle and unproductive, it sat on the dry sand stacking pebbles into piles.

N-0x7G3BDdE44fe8, thought Gnomon, deciding it pertinent to name the appendage.

Pebblex, Gnomon flagged the wayward nodalex via the ship’s Metatron. Considering how far away from Gnomon-Prime they were, Gnomon considered prudent it personally monitors all anomalies no matter how trivial.

Continue reading “Draconis Prime”